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Post by Anne Porter on Jan 30, 2008 22:42:27 GMT -5
Hey! Okays... So I've got an idea for the... I guess... plot (??) of the next book. I think they should be living in a premonition and have really wacky things happen as the days go back and forth.
-So here's the rest of my idea:- *The premonition takes place over one month. With every new day for four days (one for each week), one of the characters finds themself in the first day of the week (pick either Sunday or Monday, it really doesn't matter). Then it continues in that pattern until they've gone full-circle through all of the weeks in that month, then they will get a second chance to live through that month and re-do anything they may have messed up or not liked from before. But, anything can happen, so they've got to watch out and be careful of what they say or do. And, to add more to the story, I thought to put it in the same month that Anne's wedding day is... yeah?*
What do you think? I mean, yeah, it takes a lot of thinking to write but, I think it would make a really great story if we could pull it off.
If you didn't understand the weekdays transition thingy, here's something that might help:
Monday 1, Monday 2, Monday 3, Monday 4 Tues 1, Tues 2, Tues 3, Tues 4 Wednesday 1, Wednesday 2, Wednesday 3, Wednesday 4... etc. And so on until the entire month is completed. Then they get a second chance, like I said before, to re-live the entire thing and fix any mistakes they may have made.
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Post by Serayna Joel Evi on Jan 31, 2008 18:44:26 GMT -5
like... skip a whole crap load of stuff? hmm... this could work... OH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay... so let's say you're wedding is on a thursday... on wednesday Anne and Serayna are talking and laughing, and having fun... and then the next wednesday anne's all excited and the wednesday after that... and we find out at one point that she's pregnant or something... dude... it sounded good in my head...
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Post by Anne Porter on Jan 31, 2008 19:00:56 GMT -5
Or, her wedding could be somewhere at the middle of the month on a Sunday (or Saturday, depending on when the first day of the week will be)... And we can save that for last... like, we could do this: Week 1 Week 3 (Anne's Wedding- Start of week 3/end of week 2) Week 2 Week 4
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Post by Serayna Joel Evi on Feb 1, 2008 20:09:59 GMT -5
ya...awesome Ok... i just had coffee... it's raining... and i'm alreadyt super hyper...
This may sound really stalkerlicious of me... but can you tell me exactly what you told them... and then tell me what Andrew was saying about tomorrow... i heard something...
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Post by Anne Porter on Feb 2, 2008 11:36:01 GMT -5
ummm... not stalkerlicious, just nosy haha but that's ok. And they guessed it. I gave them the first and second letters and wouldn't shutup until they knew they had guessed it. I did not confirm nor deny that their answer was correct... Oh, and it wasn't Andrew talking about the weekend, it was Josh... Let's just say, a few months ago he told me a sort of extremely personal secret about his family... I'm still wondering why he told me though... ... But it saddens me that something like that has to happen to someone like him.
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Post by Serayna Joel Evi on Feb 2, 2008 14:37:03 GMT -5
So they know my middle name? crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh well... i won't accept or deny the fact that they know it... i almost convinced geoff my middle name was kathryn... let's see... a good middle name to use as a back up for when they ask... Robyn... awesome...
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Post by Anne Porter on Feb 3, 2008 15:32:14 GMT -5
"Melinda Robin Relph" doesn't sound very good. I think "Melinda Kathryn Relph" sounds a lot better. Besides, I made them both swear not to say anything. I know I can probably trust Josh not to say anything but I'm not so sure about Andrew (I think that's his name?)...
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Post by Serayna Joel Evi on Feb 3, 2008 20:11:51 GMT -5
technically it's george... but yea... andrew... eventually he's going to "forget" and call me my full name...
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Post by Serayna Joel Evi on Feb 3, 2008 20:12:11 GMT -5
crap... i got jelly in my hair.
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Post by Anne Porter on Feb 3, 2008 22:44:28 GMT -5
hahahahahaahahahaha!!! That reminded me of a Family Guy episode! This little fat boy was running from a swarm of bees (and he was following a group of kids who were also running away from the bees)... He yells, "Hey guys! Wait up!" And when he says it, he's, like, whining and about to cry; then his lunchbox falls open and a jar of honey spills on him and he stops running and cries, "Gosh Darn it, I got honey all over my legs!"
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Post by Serayna Joel Evi on Feb 4, 2008 2:03:54 GMT -5
awesomly awesome! dude... instead of doing my math homework... i was randomly doodling in my planner... now it looks like a piece of crap....
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Post by Anne Porter on Feb 4, 2008 21:19:56 GMT -5
hahahahaha!
Hey, but what does it smell like??
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Post by Serayna Joel Evi on Feb 5, 2008 19:16:40 GMT -5
idk... i haven't smelt it... i think the book may be too short... perhaps we should take what we have of the second book and so more... and add it in...
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Post by Anne Porter on Feb 5, 2008 21:07:23 GMT -5
yeah we could do that, but we need to continue from where we left off when Anne dies.
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Post by Serayna Joel Evi on Feb 5, 2008 21:37:12 GMT -5
okay...
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