Post by Anne Porter on Jan 16, 2008 23:49:27 GMT -5
OMG I put it in order FINALLY!!!!! Here is the complete first book!!! We just need to do a bit of fine-tuning, nothing too major. But I think we should leave the cliffhanger at the end. I was quite satified with that one.
And I also think we need to put an "About the Characters" section somewhere in the first book or something so that people won't be so confused as to what's going on. Unless we can do enough "fine tuning" so that the story makes a little bit more sense. I'm not so sure myself, but try to read through the whole thing, maybe print out the pages, and read it from the perspective of someone who's never read it before... Better yet, have someone who's never read it before read it from the perspective of someone who's never read it before. So if you could print these chapters out, that would be great. Otherwise we can wait until I get ink cartridges for my printer (but who knows how long that could take, it's been a few weeks since the ink ran out)... So... We'll see how it goes... We can drop a copy off with Miss Cassity (now known as Mrs. Posey) and see if she wants to read it, edit it, pass it around to Mrs. DeCarlo... But overall, I think we can really do this. I really believe we can write this. For some reason, this time is so much different from those years before when we've tried to write things... This feels like it's actually going to work.
And I also think we need to put an "About the Characters" section somewhere in the first book or something so that people won't be so confused as to what's going on. Unless we can do enough "fine tuning" so that the story makes a little bit more sense. I'm not so sure myself, but try to read through the whole thing, maybe print out the pages, and read it from the perspective of someone who's never read it before... Better yet, have someone who's never read it before read it from the perspective of someone who's never read it before. So if you could print these chapters out, that would be great. Otherwise we can wait until I get ink cartridges for my printer (but who knows how long that could take, it's been a few weeks since the ink ran out)... So... We'll see how it goes... We can drop a copy off with Miss Cassity (now known as Mrs. Posey) and see if she wants to read it, edit it, pass it around to Mrs. DeCarlo... But overall, I think we can really do this. I really believe we can write this. For some reason, this time is so much different from those years before when we've tried to write things... This feels like it's actually going to work.
